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Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 3:25 am Post subject: Elege Eternum
[Initial Information] – Read if you are to RP or battle with Eternum.
-Kill List
-Part I: Physical
-Part I.I: Inventory
-Part I.II: Force Powers
-Part I.III: Skills
[Alternative Information] - Read if you want to
-Part I.IV: Biography
-Part I.V: Extra Artwork
-Part I.VI: Signature Force Powers
-Part I.VII: Signature Style
-Part I.VIII: Music
-Part I.IX: Historical Events
-Part I.X: Ship
[- Part I: Physical -] {Character Name} Elege Eternum {Given Title} Darth Eternum {Age} 21 {Gender} Male {Height} 5,10 {Weight} 89 Kilometers {Species} Human {Birthplace} Tatooine {Homeworld} Korriban {Appearance}
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He has a very distinct appearance filled with somewhat unforgettable features.. Amongst them are foremost his eyes.. One whom looks upon them does not easilly forget such horrific orbs. His body is well toned though not quite bulky.. His porcelain white skin fits with his jet black hair. For it seems quite beautiful in the eyes of some... Yet it looks horrific to others... Some are know to have nightmares.. Others have dreams.
The clothing in which he wears is very sith. He has two sets. One of which is jet black robes. The robes are very unique, not seeming to look like the Jedi's over coated robes. But, more of a well fit robe which was tied on by three buckles. It also opens very wide at the bottom, to show his legs, and his menaciing black gothic boots. Under these robes are another set of Sith robes. There is a red part which he takes off and on, usually does not have under the black robes. Though he been seen wearing the robes. This area in which can be taken on and off, has strange markings. It is said that they are written in the sith language..
~{Personality}~ A calculated coldness. A malicious persona that would consume any man from inside to out, if he did not possess a herculean strength to control it. Eternum has cruel, sedate personality. He weighs the importance of every word that he speaks. He calculates every crevasse in his own words, as well as in the words of others. He is not quick to anger, but should one do so, they would find themselves in a very sore spot indeed. He knows his power, but he does not flaunt it overtly, rather it is brought to the table in a confident, serious manner. Not one for cheap tricks, Eternum knows his worth, which makes his temper all the more to be feared. Any weakness that he has is carefully concealed behind the stoic mask, which seems eternally stamped on his face. He does not act surprised, as though everything that happens has been expected. A cold, calm demeanor secretes the wickedness brewing beneath the surface. .
[- Part I.I: Inventory -] {Armor}
•Sith Robes
The robes were laced with Sith Alchemy. They are not to strong, but give him a certain amount of extra connection to the force. They were created by the master before him, who was at one point the sith lord.
{Head}
•Nothing
{Neck}
•Nothing
{Left Arm}
•Sith Alchemy Robes
The glove covers Eternum's lower arm and hand. It is black colored and made so that he can use his left hand without restrictions. Explained a bit in the appearance. This glove is very tight to his skin, and gives him free reign as if it was his skin. {Right Arm}
•Metalic Glove
The glove covers Eternum's lower arm and hand. It is black colored and made so that he can use his right hand without restrictions. Explained a bit in the appearance. This glove is very tight to his skin, and gives him free reign as if it was his skin. {Belt}
•Main Hand Blade "Right" This is his offensive, or main hand blade. It is what he uses to attack at his enemies. And it is a very unique blade. It has been created to have the most perfect sharpness, while having a very strong. The items he added on this blade are only of a few. All of which are completely unique to the world, not being the normal crystal. The blade also gives off an intense purple color.
•Off Hand Blade "Left" This blade is instead used for defence. It is what he used to deflect an enemies blade. Though it is used for defence, he some times uses it for both. For that reason, he decided to make both decently the same. Though with a few changes. The Kaiburr gives the blade an intense crimson color. Velmorite Rubat Kaiburr
•Telepatic Combat Sabers
These sabers are built by Eternum himself, they have small short black colored grips, quite hard to acctualy wield in one hand effectively. They are doubble sided (meaning a beam comes from both ends off the handle) and the beams glows in a intense red color, the beam can be measured to about 4dm. They are placed in a well hidden black holster on the back off his belt
•Termal Detonators x 2
They explode... {Left Leg}
•Sith Robes
{Right Leg}
•Sith Robes
{Other}
•Two Staff Lightsaber Which Are Unique. They hang from his back very neatly on occasion, not always having with him..
[- Part I.II: Force Powers -] (Please PM me if you think this is to über, or if you have any thoughts about my list)
[Core]
Force Speed "Burst Of Speed"
Force Cloak
Force Concealment
Force Sense
Farseeing
Force Empathy
Far Seeing
Telekinesis
Telepathy
[Universal]
Battle Meditation
Comprehend Speach
Doppleganger
Force Comprehension
Force Deflection
Force Illusion
Force Below
Force Breach
Force Throw - Variation Of Telekinesis
Force Whirlwind - Variation Of Telekinesis
Force Blow - Advanced Defensive Variation Of Telekinesis
Force Wave - Advanced Variation of Telekinesis
Force Repulse
Precognition
[Light]Battlemind
Battle Precognition - Variation Of Precognition
Combustion
Force Healing - "Wishing To Teach Himself"
Force Stasis
Force Stasis Field - Advanced Variation Of Telekinesis
[Dark]
Drain Knowledge
Force Fear
Force Insanity
Force Drain
Force Flight
Force Lightning
Chain Lightning
Force Storm
Force Scream
Force Wound
Force Choke
Force Grip
Force Crush
Fury
[- Part I.III: Skills -]{Skills}
• Ninjutsu - Open Hand
• Acting
• Stealth
• Deciet / Persuation
• Politition
• Memorized Sith Language
• Sith Sorcery - Master
• Lightsaber Combat - Form II Makashi
• Lightsaber Combat - Form IV Ataru
• Lightsaber Combat - Form VI: Jar'Kai
• Lightsaber Combat - Form VIII: Eternum (Explained)
• Lightsaber Combat - Telekenetic
• Spaceship Piloting
• Force Sensetivity
[- Part I.IV Biography -]
Elege Eternum was raised in a well known crime familly upon Tatooine that were dubbed the Eternum's, a young child embraced in to this world of crime he was always at a distance from anyone. The only young child in such a high place he was lonely and not allowed to fraternize with any of the commoners as his parents used to call them. Due to all his socializing with criminals he very swiftly developed a keen and cunning mind that had little regard for life and knew very well what to do to benefit himself in every possible way.
Things however changed when he got a new room that looked out over Tatooine, often did he see a young girl running by, playing with the other lower class kids.. Dressed badly and with unkempt hair and awful hygiene, yet there was something about this girl that enticed him to no end. Perhaps it was because even though he was so well established in life that nothing could be reached, they were miles apart and his hand would never even flick her soft locks of hair.
Little did he know that his parents knew about his newfound affection and didn't approve of it, which is why they let him go to the streets more and more often. He encountered her quite often during that period of time, but was always guided by several guards which prevented him from making any true contact with her. His parents wanted to give him hope and then take it away from him.
He was sold to the sith not long after that.. However in the middle of the transfer the ship was boarded by two Jedi and with the few troops that were on the ship there was little resistance. He was at the age of thirteen back then, the Jedi sensed a strong force power in him however and took him with them, training however was something they were reluctant in as he was found too old to be trained well. In the end however he was grabted a Master, skilled for his age and a wise teacher. Elege however was young, brash, selfish and tained by his past.
Though after a few years this seemed to change, slowy but gradually. The clone wars however changed all this when he fought side by side with his master something in him changed, a cold dark aura and a lust for death. Though due to all the commotion his Master did not notice in time, the clone wars had brought something forth within Elege that were both frightening and dark. It was at the age of nineteen that he left his Master to make his place within the Sith.
In his first mission he had to steal a datapad from the Eternum's for the Sith and it was there that he bumped in to the girl again.. Eternum had grown cold and demonic during the time of his absence, without any humanity left.. However it was like the past just caught up to him and granted him some of his humanity back, at first they fought as he tried to overcompensate for his feelings and tried to deny them but it hurt him to hurt her.
Slowly they started to grow closer in the small time he had during his mission, to make sure she would survive the future he killed his own parents and arrranged for her to take their place. The only humanity left in Darth Eternum is this woman, though no one so far has ever known about her existance because he is very careful with that information. It's because he wishes to keep her safe.. His research so far has been for immortallity and power but the true research will be to transfer a normal human spirit to another body.. So he can grant immortallity to anyone aswell as take it. Though as he does so, he must keep himself completely silent, trying to build a small army to retake the planet in which the sith were so dominate... Maybe leave the galaxy.. into unknown space.. to gain more supporters.
[- I.V Extra Artwork -]
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[- I.VI Signature Force Powers -]
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Spirit Transference :
The power enabled the wielder's spirit to survive the death of their organic body by usurping control of a suitable receptacle. If the invading consciousness was powerful enough, they could override and destroy the spirit of the body that was invaded. However, the practitioner's own body disintegrated in the attempt (much like a Jedi Master becoming one with the Force). If the target resisted the possession attempt, or if the user failed in their attempt to bond with the object, their disembodied spirit, with nowhere else to go, was consigned to Chaos. Given the power's inherent difficulty, unpredictable nature, and the unspeakable consequences of failure, most would-be practitioners chose to have their bodies cloned by trained technicians and kept in a hidden safehouse, unconscious in stasis tanks until they were needed. The clones, lacking life experiences or a sense of self, were each little more than a blank slate, upon which the original could imprint their consciousness with ease.
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Force Clones :
The power enables the user to control clones that have the same DNA code as the user, Eternum invented this power on his long days locked in his chambers in which he researched ways to empower himself. The power's main weakness is that when controlling clone bodies the user is in a meditative and transit state in which he cannot sense anything in his own surroundings which makes him very vulnerable for attacks. The clones themselves are strong however the more clones he uses and the distance he uses them from deeply dissipates their strength in the force and reaction speed. from a short distance he can control two clones to fight like Sith Lords, however more then that they lower a rank and from a short distance any more then 4 become apprentices or weaker. From a very long distance the Dark lord can control one clone to fight as a Sith lord but it requires all his concentration whilst from such a long distance if he uses two the power immediatly drops to warrior ranks and lower. The clones themselves cannot be killed by mere bullets, their spinal cord.
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Midichlorian Manipulation :
was form of Sith Alchemy allegedly mastered by Darth Plagueis. Requiring immense knowledge of the dark side of the Force, it was the ability to create, maintain, or save life through the influencing of midi-chlorians to a certain degree
Darth Plagueis stated that a child born of this power would be the embodiment of the Force. Later, Palpatine used the promise of this power's effects to entice Anakin Skywalker further to the dark side. He had also made the same proposition to Ferus Olin. It is also possible Darth Plagueis used this to create Anakin Skywalker.
It is also possible that Darth Sion used this power to keep himself alive.
needs to be severed as Eternum uses the force to connect to their nerves and control them. Cut the nerves, cut the control.
[- I.VII Signature Style -]
Form VIII - Eternum Style : The Eternum style is a style that uses two double-sided sabers, focusing either on attack, defense and attack or completely on defense.. These are three ways he can switch between in battle, it is completely unique and unknown still, it has a lot of potential and is amazingly difficult to master.. Darth Eternum however after a long time working on it has finally perfected it, it is easilly used now in every situation from one opponent to a horde of melee and ranged opponents. It requires concentration however after so much practice it comes quite natural to him and the only weakness that he cannot remove is the amount of stamina that it takes to fight in this style. It's purpose is to quickly incapacitate all the opponents before ones stamina runs out.
[- I.IX Historical Events -]
-Nothing At The Moment
[- I.IX Ships -]
Name: [i]Serenity Weaponery: One Powerfull Superlaser, Dozens Of Ion Cannons, Hundreds Of Heavy Lasers, Plus A Few Gravity Wells.
Defence: Sith Designed Sheilding.
Systems: Class-I Hyperdrive, Back Up Class-III Hyperdrive, Inhanced Sublight Engines.
Stationed: 100,000 Droid Soldiers, 50,000 Human Soldiers, 100 AT-ATs, Five Prefabricatal Bases.
Crew: 200,000 Human Personel, 500,000 Droid Personel.
Link:Eclipse
Last edited by Venom on Sun Apr 27, 2008 12:42 am; edited 14 times in total
What a concise and detailed application. And an interesting read. I also enjoyed the fact that his weaknesses are centered around another human. Accepted and welcome aboard. _________________
Ok, I Feel Eternum Is Extremely.. To powerful.. not just for his age.. before.. I want alittle room to grow.. so for the next few days I shall be weakening him.. and maybe strengthing him in one area.. I Also plan to change his age around once agian, sorry..
Maybe just before he begins studying about the Sith Born... _________________
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